Project Proposal Feedback

I wasn’t particularly surprised by the feedback, as I had already identified that my project needed focusing after finding too much primary research on the Lancaster trip and not knowing what to look at first. I am pleased that the examiner thinks my project has a solid basis, however I understand that I need a focused question to ask and a clearer aim. I am therefore going to base my project off the question ‘Do our personal possessions define us?’, as I am most interested in this area and have already started looking at the link between possessions and identity. I may also have to alter my weekly plan on my project proposal, as there are now some pieces of research which won’t apply to my focused concept.