Yearbook ideas

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Artist statement

First draft

‘The more stuff you own, the more your stuff owns you’

To remove clutter from our lives is to gain a clearer view and greater happiness

Feedback

  • Very concise, which fits into my focus on minimalism
  • Make the statement more minimalistic – both sentences communicate the same message
  • I would like to keep the sentence about us gaining a clearer view, as this is what my blind shows and what the viewer will experience when they interact with my blind. However, I think that I need to replace the phrase ‘clearer view’ with a single word that has more impact.

Final statement with improvements 

To remove clutter from our lives is to gain clarity